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Posted by Josiah on July 23, 19104 at 15:11:28:
In Reply to: hello from a newbie (^_^) posted by marshwriggle on May 29, 19102 at 14:49:48:
: hello,
: I am a budding poet and here is one of my poems. please tell me what you think?
: marshwriggle
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: YOU WERE THERE
: you were there in the wind, I heard it whisper your name,
: you were there, in the rain, I felt your tears drop down upon my face,
: you were there in the snow, the flak
es falling from your soul into mine,
: you were there, on sunny days I saw your eyes in the bright rays,
: you were there, espying me from behind our sister moon,
: I looked for you in the wind, I heard it whisper your name,
: I looked for you in the rain, I felt you cry upon my face,
: I counted the flakes of snow and knew that somewhere out there you were counting
: also
: I looked into my ice-cream on sunny days and saw you melt into my heart
: and in the full light of the moon,your reflection could be clearly seen
: my darling lost son I looked for you everywhere and now I have found you
: I can rest again and love you the way that I should have been allowed to
: Anna brown march 6th 2002
Hi, I found a cool and functional online auction web site second only to fee-bay (you know who I mean).
I saw your web site while searching Google and have found it a nice place to spend a little time.
When ya get a chance, please come over and say 'Hi' on our chat boards.
The address is Online Auction.
I've been there almost for 4 years now. And, although it's not a living (for most of us), it's still a fun place to hang out and make a little extra something with friends.
Thanks for listening... hope to see you there.