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Posted by marshwriggle on May 29, 19102 at 14:49:48:

hello,

I am a budding poet and here is one of my poems. please tell me what you think?

marshwriggle
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YOU WERE THERE

you were there in the wind, I heard it whisper your name,
you were there, in the rain, I felt your tears drop down upon my face,
you were there in the snow, the flakes falling from your soul into mine,
you were there, on sunny days I saw your eyes in the bright rays,
you were there, espying me from behind our sister moon,

I looked for you in the wind, I heard it whisper your name,
I looked for you in the rain, I felt you cry upon my face,
I counted the flakes of snow and knew that somewhere out there you were counting
also
I looked into my ice-cream on sunny days and saw you melt into my heart
and in the full light of the moon,your reflection could be clearly seen
my darling lost son I looked for you everywhere and now I have found you
I can rest again and love you the way that I should have been allowed to

Anna brown march 6th 2002

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: hello, : I am a budding poet and here is one of my poems. please tell me what you think? : marshwriggle : ---------------------------------------------- : YOU WERE THERE : you were there in the wind, I heard it whisper your name, : you were there, in the rain, I felt your tears drop down upon my face, : you were there in the snow, the flakes falling from your soul into mine, : you were there, on sunny days I saw your eyes in the bright rays, : you were there, espying me from behind our sister moon, : I looked for you in the wind, I heard it whisper your name, : I looked for you in the rain, I felt you cry upon my face, : I counted the flakes of snow and knew that somewhere out there you were counting : also : I looked into my ice-cream on sunny days and saw you melt into my heart : and in the full light of the moon,your reflection could be clearly seen : my darling lost son I looked for you everywhere and now I have found you : I can rest again and love you the way that I should have been allowed to : Anna brown march 6th 2002

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