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: : : Is this discussion still active? : : Yes,it is emotional and a well written story. : : A story that contains action, sadness and funny. : : It has excellent old english and entertains the readers. : : It's brilliant in comparasions and is very interesting to all readers. : : It's got a lot of adjectives which describe the characters well. : : The sparrow is very loving and that is the example we need to become better people. : : It's got an exellent moral which is really understanding. : : It involves characters which take different actions to a simple situation. : : It's completely filled with such brilliant language that makes the reader want to keep on reading. : : It's understandable and has great features which make the reader understand the character's description. : : Oscar Wilde entrances you in this story, that makes you want to read on and on. : : The happy prince is a really caring person and he really hated his environment, so he gave away all of his riches. : : The happy prince was a very selfless person. : : The introduction takes you straight into the story. : : The council are really pathetic and daft!!!!!!!!!! : : They are so daft that they have to stick to the mayor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! : : The Swallow is so funny that it enchants the whole story, which makes the reader think the story is well written. : : We think that your comments are good but could do with a little improving. : You could do this by adding some quotes of evidence from the story 'The Happy Prince.' : However, we do agree that what you said about the councillers is definitely true! : On the other hand you could of added a tiny bit more information about The Happy Prince, : i.e. . 'He was gilded all over with thin leaves of fine gold, for eyes he had two bright sapphires, and a large red ruby glowed on his sword-hilt.' :

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